October 27

100 Word Challenge!!

This week we are looking for pieces written in the first person. Many of you like to write a story about hero or villain but this week it has to be about you!

The prompt is:

…as the door slammed, I knew…

Please leave your story in the comment section of this post!

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Posted October 27, 2017 by mrmccraysclass in category 100 Word Challenge

15 thoughts on “100 Word Challenge!!

  1. balloake

    …..as the door slamed i knew …….that I was going to get in big trouble and that he not Gonna give up so I went down stairs and then my dog came down and sniffed me out and found me so then I thought he wanted to play but then he wanted to go outside and then my dad came down stairs and I was in big trouble and I apologize to him and then I wasn’t in trouble them my sister came down stairs and me and her went to the corner store up the street and that’s the end.

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  2. shawbra

    As the door slammed I knew that mr.mrccray stay up working and he turned in to hulk smashed his desk then threw me five miles away in my house. I woke up 3 days later on Friday I partied and did not go to school ever again . I wish i went to school on that day because . Mr.mrccay got hit in the face by a wip cream pie. I saw mr.mrccray he threw me again in my house I woke up 3 days later and it was Monday . Nooooooo my life is over nooooooo help no I’m not going to school so mr.mrccray can throw me again nooooooooo.

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  3. flowekah

    As the door slammed, I knew that there was a man lurking through the house so I went down to see what was going on and saw a shadow. The floors started to creek again as the lights started to flicker on and off in my bedroom. When I went back up stairs I saw that my window was broken and the blankets on my bed were out the window. I went to go check in the shed because I heard another strange noise so I went in the shed and found that someone was was stealing all my things. He ran I couldn’t catch up…

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  4. beckcam

    As the door slammed, I knew that someone just broke in The guy his a loaded gun, A knife in his pocket, and a backpack. I wonder what’s in that back I said. So he pull out a stethoscope we have a safe but it’s behind a book case I wonder what’s the stethoscope is for.The next thing is a crowbar. What’s the crowbar is for. Some use it to rip the book case down and found the safe.There was 1,000,000 dollars in the safe. But the good thing is that the safe has nothing in it the real safe is at my grandma’s house. THAT THE END

    Word count 107

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  5. hardetoc

    As the door slammed, I knew Sarah and I were going to be haunted forever. As Sarah, Jenna and I moved closer to the haunted house,Jenna went closer and did the saying that was on the door. “Dont do it Jenna your going to get hurt” i said, but Jenna said ” I’m not scared I said” so Jenna did the saying NEVER NEVER KNOCK. The door slowly opened and a creepy noise came wooooooooohhh so all of us jumped the fence and ran away. Then Jenna got away and her devil horn was on the ground. So you thought this was over, here part two.

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  6. curiange

    As the door slammed, I knew there was chicken nuggets in my pants and with all my might I ate the chicken nuggets. The door I slammed was connected to the jail I escaped the chicken nuggets where to slow me down so I couldn’t escape. But they didn’t know that chicken nuggets where my favorite food. And out of nowhere Spider-Man showed up and was like hey I’m your friendly neighborhood Spider-Man. Then he took me home with his spider webs and now where super cool friends my roommate reaper said you want to play overwatch with Spider-Man. FIN

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  7. eamesjay

    As the door slammed I know that my mom was back from walmart and she probably has the nerf gun that I wanted for Christmas. That means that I can have a nerf war with my friends when she came in the house she said can you get the stuff in the back of the car. Except the big box and I said to myself she probably doesn’t want me to ruin the surprise so I got the stuff out of the back. Then my mom went to the car and got the big box then she said open it at Christmas NOOOO.

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  8. geougnev

    As the door slammed shut I knew,that I wasn’t alone.

    I move to this nice house by the forest. It was all blue,that was my lest favorite. When I move in I knew I wasn’t alone,because my dog was barking at the wall. When I finished unpacking and putting every thing in place,I heard I whisper like “I see you.”

    I ran out of my house with my dog,with me almost peeing my pants. I called my sister saying” I heard something that wasn’t me or my dog.” She didn’t believe ,but she came over . To see her it herself. (TO BE CONTINUED)

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  9. gardnchr

    …As the door slammed I knew somthing was going on, I have never heard a door slam in my house before our door can barely handle slamming so it fell of its hinges, luckily we had our sturdy glass door behind it, so I sat down on my reclined couch and played on my tablet. This had never happened before. After thirty minutes I went out side and my dog started flying and chasing her tail in circles, THEN IT STARTED RAINING POTATO NUGGETS/tater tots. I started catching them in my mouth, then super man apeared and said ¨CHICKEN NUGGETS¨ and he threw some at me…

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  10. scofiabi

    As the door slammed, I knew I was in big trouble here is my story.

    It was one night when I played a prank on my mom it was a really, really bad prank I used my friend she is half vampire half witch and half human her name is sally. She hid in my moms closet and when my mom opened the closet sally took my mom to Sally’s dungeon and my mom got really scared, sally put a cloak on my mom so my mom doesn’t know what is going on we talked about what we where going to do. TO BE COUNTINUED

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  11. carlssav

    As the door slammed, I knew something was going on because I had never saw the door slam like that before. Today was unusual because when I woke up I had never seen mom slam the door like that. So I started guessing I thought that maybe it was cold outside then I assumed that something was going on outside or that she was mad but then I gave up and went to school. When I was at school I was so anxious and it was scaring me the thought of it made me tremble so I went through my day trying not to tremble anymore.

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  12. Amirah

    …as the door slammed, I knew… that he was coming. That he was here and he wasn’t going away. I here footsteps above me. Like the footsteps of somebody who is pacing the ground. Step by step. I get even more and more nervous. Badam,badam my heart is racing. I can’t hold it in anymore. I run downstairs. Thoughts go through my head. So i run out of my house try to find a place with any people. So I run to the local resturant. I look behind myself. He’s following me I know it. So I run to the resturant, and eat the best tacos.

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  13. Danny

    One night i was sleeping when I heard the back door creeking open I got out of bed as the door slammed, I knew someone was in my house i went down stairs to the basement and locked all of the doors and got out my Samsung galaxy and called the police then I looked at all the entirenses to the house including the drive way when I heard the sirens i saw the crook run to the back door but it was locket then I saw the sleek crusers pull into the driveway i un locked the door the police arrested the crook. The end

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  14. hillsh

    As the slammed, I knew. I Sall it he comes around every year. If you eat more then one piece of candy he comes out of the candy bowl and finds you and says JUST-ONE-PIECE. The green monster he is The troll in the bowl. He came out side. Me and my sister were outside and the door shut. My parents old us about this. He ZOOMED in the bush. He screamed JUST-ONE-PIECE. We ran in the house I tripped. We both ran then he fought us then 5 minutes later we turned into candy…THE END

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  15. billejos

    the door slammed I knew, That something is wrong but I left it alone and I went to bed then I heard glass shatter I got up and went downstairs and I not see anything and I said to my self ”I am dreaming ” and I whet back upstairs in to my room. Then I herd a big BANG, on my window at first I ignored it then is got louder and louder and louder than I got up and got my little friend bat then I seen a person at my window then I hit the window as hard as possible. TO BE COUNTINED

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